Saturday, August 9, 2008

Unforgettable moments!! Part -3


Note: Really sorry for the delay, Please have a look on other parts for the continuation.
First time in his life, Vicky woke up early in the morning. He got ready and took his breakfast as well. He took newspaper in his hand and ran to the balcony to see if he would be able to see her again. He was in deep thought and suddenly,

“So aren’t you playing Cricket today?” by hearing the amazing sound, Vicky again came out from thoughts.
“Wow!! Now I caught you… First and foremost …tell me your name,” Vicky asked with excitement and curiosity.

She laughed and said, “You didn’t catch me, that is me who is asking you.”
“That won’t make any difference as per our last promise, in the next meeting you are going to tell me your name”, Vicky answered with smile.

She started laughing and said, “Do you think my name will make any difference in the way we talks??”
“Well!! Why don’t you tell me your name?????????????” Vicky shouted like a child with little anger.

“I will answer you first tell me why are you not playing cricket today? ” She asked with smile.
“Cause, I would love to take caution for not breaking your window”, Vicky answered.

“Thanks a lot for that. So…” She said.
“So what?? C’mon yaar don’t play this game with me…. and be a nice girl and tell your sweet name please??” Vicky smiled and asked again…

“I am Pooja, Happy???” She said.
“Wow, what a nice name that you got!! So now good friends?????” Vicky asked while starring in her eyes.

She nodded with smile.
“So done, lets meet on Mc Donald, I would love to give a treat for our first friendship”

“In that case I will prefer some desi stuff instead of any Americanized stuff”, She answered.
“Then done!! Lets have Pani puri at Law garden”, Vicky was feeling that, he went really far but that’s exactly he wanted to.

“I love pani purit.” She answered.
“So lets go for spicy Pani Puri now”, Vicky said.

She smiled and said, “I don’t have anything to ride, I wish I could have join you today”
Vicky said, “Why don’t we walk?? What you say as its not far?”

“Yes, that’s fine”, Pooja said.
“You know something Pooja, I would love to be honest, you are my first friend who is girl, and I am feeling like I know you very well”, Vicky said.

“Ha ha ha, you don’t know me well, that’s the only reality.” Pooja smiled like a child.
Vicky liked all her good and bad things, in any case.

“So what are you studying?” Vicky asked.
“I am enjoying my vacation of 9th standard, as I have to work hard for SSC exam”, Pooja said.

“Wow, this is call co-incidence, I just gave my SSC exam, I have all books, Tell me if you need any”
“Are you sure? I may need it”, she smiled and answered

By the time they reach at Panipuri.
“Bhaiya, give us two plates panipuri”, Pooja shouted having money in her hand.
“Hey!!! I am giving money as I am giving treat”, Vicky said.

“Of course no, Friendship should be two sided, not one sided, and you just said that you are going to help me for SSC, that’s quite enough for me”, Pooja answered with smile.
Vicky just amazed with her attitude, He couldn’t say anything about.

They enjoyed Pani Puri with full of smiles and talk.
“Will you come tomorrow, when I will sponsor you Pani Puri?” Vicky asked?
“No, Actually I am leaving today in the evening for Mumbai”, she looked at Vicky eyes and smiled.

“Hey this is cheating, we just been friends and you are leaving?? And how am I going to help you for SSC.” Vicky asked.
“Even I don’t know”, She answered.

“Well give me your number, I wanted to call once I will be in Dombivalli”, Vicky asked.
She nodded. They exchanged their numbers and left. Vicky kept looking her until she disappeared.

Vicky was quite happy. This is the first time he ever involved in such kind of situation. He was excited about almost every thing associated with her. Was it love or just an attraction? “This is just 2nd meeting and why I am feeling so much for her??” Vicky laughed and asked him-self. “May be God has something in his mind, whatever it is, it is very beautiful”, He smiled and closed his eyes after talking with him-self.

(3 parts more to go)To be continued...

12 comments:

Unknown said...

whether she will leave ahmedabad or he will go to mumbai...whats in next part...waiting for it!!

JINAN said...

Thank you Prash for your comments...Keep reading blog and you will know about what going to be...

Unknown said...

hmm... somehow i feel like whts d next b goin to happen... it looks like a very gud story amzing it is.. bt is it ur mind made?? or u hv read else where??

Anonymous said...

cool! keep writing dost! Interesting read..waiting for next part!

angel from heaven said...

very sweet, looking forward to the continuation.

JINAN said...

@all thanks for comment, i will keep writing :).

@sweetu,
It is mind made story though as an Indian guy, I may have come across thousands of stories so my mind definitely working on ideas from many of them;)

Anonymous said...

Well, Jinan, I gotta agree, it is really nice story, as to what i had written. It goes step by step. Yet this is a third part, a love hasn't been realized whereas mine, shows the love affection from the first part. Coming across many story helps writing a story.
Amazing story... Bro....

Ani said...

Sahi hai...i hope gonna be a romantic love story!! like the way u r going..keep writing.. :)waiting for next part!!!

Thought Provoked..... said...

hey so far your story is good yaar...but have some surprises & twists in the story hence forth...keep going dude...

JINAN said...

@ani

Thanks for your comment. I don't know if it going to be romantic or not ...but yaa its going to be a true love story for sure....Hope it will be romantic enough though..as it is true;)

@Vaibhav
Thanks for your comment, as I already said, You have got an unique writing:)...Yup...You may see a real affection in coming parts soon...

@thought Provoked

Well, still three more parts to go, lets see whats approaching!!! Trust me, It will touch hearts of all of you:) and yeah...It may be smooth and simple love story or twist....lets see;)

@all
Thanks for such a sweet comments:)

Unknown said...

nice story u got there... so whts gona happen now they gona tolk on phone or hes gona move to mumbai..?? nd tht was my idea about happy???

JINAN said...

@ Priya,

Thanks for your comment, I wish the next part is the most touching part ever .....